Quick comments:
Debating effectiveness of different charities and acting collectively are not mutually exclusive, let’s do both no?
Not sure why specifically cruelty should be the thing to look at, and why it helps more than looking at impact
My impression is that the perspective of collective actions being important is less neglected in EA than you seem to think it is. Same for problems of using overly reductive metrics.
Maybe adding some background on the ways you’ve seen these problems in your interactions with the EA world would help
A lot more concrete examples on what you think should be done differently would be helpful
What would EA look like if your view was more common?
(I only read the text, didn’t watch the video)
Props for the initiative!
What names did you consider for the pledge? One con of the current name is that it could elicit some reactions like:
“so you think you’re better than others?”
“how arrogant/naive to think you can know better than others what one should do”
“why a comparative instead of a collaborative frame?”
“saying someone has a better career than someone else is kind of like saying they’re a better person, that’s unfair”
It might be largely down to whether someone interprets better as “better than I might otherwise do” or “better than others’ careers”. Likely depends on culture too, for example I think here in Finland the above reactions could be more likely since people tend to value humbleness quite a bit.
Anyway I’m not too worried since the name has positives too, and you can always adapt the name based on how outreach goes if you do end up experimenting with it. 👍